Arrival in the Old Country

Rejection is a normal part of submitting work for publication. Far from being a negative, I view each rejection as a step in improving my writing.

The following poem was ultimately rejected from being published in orangepeel magazine’s sixth issue ‘In Conversation’, despite reaching the later stages of review. This is the first time a poem of mine has progressed that far in the process – at least to my knowledge.

I’m grateful to the editors for their kind feedback and encouragement to submit to them again in the future.

For the poem ‘Arrival in the Old Country’, I followed the magazine’s prompt to write a poem about my favourite scene in my favourite movie. Despite finding it challenging to home in on a film, I opted for Tom Ripley’s journey to Mongibello in the 1999 film ‘The Talented Mr. Ripley’, a film that is never far from my thoughts.

The Talented Mr. Ripley, 1999

Arrival in the Old Country

My body echoes 
Rubber
In motion
Over stone.

Pink buildings
Above my view
Part
To the country.

A coast 
Road ripples
Along azure blue
New to
Mine eyes.

An isola
Calmly rising
Passes by.

Lemon tree scent
Zests the air
Like sun
Bright
And
Clear.

Arriving at the
Water’s
Edge,
Where it
Laps at sentinel
Lamps.

Changed already
From the city
An ocean away.

Excite me with
The question . . . 

Who am I
to become?